I peer assessed a film opening called 'Where the guilt lies' and gave feedback to the group.
WHAT ELEMENTS OF THIS SEQUENCE DID YOU FEEL WERE SUCCESSFUL?
Music really sets the atmosphere - creates a sense of tension
Setting/costume was thogutb out and worked well
Good camera shots - different angles included
WERE THERE ANY ASPECTS OF THE SEQUENCE WHICH YOU FELT WERE CONFUSING/DISTRACTING ETC?
Parts of the voice over don't match up - the family want people to come forward with details but want privacy.
LIST 2 THINGS WHICH YOU FEEL WOULD HAVE IMPROVED THIS SEQUENCE AND EXPLAIN.
Parts of the voice over is muffled and too quick - needs to slow it down and speak clearer.
Maybe speed up the pace of some scene to create a faster pace which would create a panicked film.
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